I need feedback

[Steveon15 113]

Hello everyone i need opinions on this video, its the most viewed animation on my channel & I am stumped at this.

If you can give me feedback that would be great.

 

 

Please check out my Channel ------------------> https://www.youtube.com/user/Steveon15

[Ayhay 2.4k]

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Too long of an intro imo. A faster drop for Steve's faint maybe?

[Marty McFly 1k]

You might want to use transitions more often

[ZZZZane 2.2k]

Work on your timing, is what I suggest. For example, when Steve turns his head, then instantly turns his head the other way, instead make him turn his head, stare for a few second, then look back in another direction. 

[Steveon15 113]

Not really what I mean't by feedback, I meant the fact that people come to my channel just for this video, why? Why would they come see a video that has problems that you guys have brought up

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

I like trains, also I feel like I've seen this before

[Mike 3.4k]

I think everything has already been said bud. All I can say is (And please excuse my harshness) As blockerlocker said, 1 in 500 people would watch "premature game-play videos" that don't have comedy. Thats why people watch Pewdiepie so much, because some people find stupid voices and annoying little wisecrack jokes the funniest thing in the whole damn world.

[Steveon15 113]

I think everything has already been said bud. All I can say is (And please excuse my harshness) As blockerlocker said, 1 in 500 people would watch "premature game-play videos" that don't have comedy. Thats why people watch Pewdiepie so much, because some people find stupid voices and annoying little wisecrack jokes the funniest thing in the whole damn world.

 

Well, most of your animations, like this one, are fairly linear, with no twists or anything, just a straight up video. The video you get most views from is different. It has an interesting title, and it makes the viewers wait for that twist, and put a bit of a smile on their face, or make them feel clever. It has to be enjoyable. As well, you pointlessly monetize your videos. You can't actually earn money till you've hit 10,000 subs, so just remove the monetizing for now.

 

Also premature game-play videos. No one likes game-play videos without comedy.

Well thank you all for your feedback, I know that the game-play videos are a bit of a bust, But most people have start off with little humor in order to find their own way of making comedy & I have just started game-plays, I'm new to the concept of game-plays and Im going to be immature, I just need some pointers