Alex's IncredibleVentures

[Spiderman 897]

This Is Where I Will Be Posting My Adventure Series Episodes! So Stay Tuned

 

 

Episode 1

 

 

Episode 2 

Edited August 28, 2014 by AnimationAlex

[Caeden117 1.8k]

Seems a bit short :I

[Spiderman 897]

Seems a bit short :I

This is just the start lel, and i didnt have too much time,

Where'd the diamond sword come from? pls answer, donald, pls 

He had it with him when he was a child

[AzoeGamer 101]

The story is weirder than me  still hearing gaben's watching you when it came like 2 or 1 years ago

This is good but short

[Joshdotmp4 2.8k]

Good, but some tips:

- Add pauses inbetween actions, rather than just going from one to the other. If you don't, animations will seem to fast and look weird.

- Also, don't have like 1 second inbetween text slides... give some time.

Hope these sorta maybe helped.

[Lumie 5.8k]

Maybe use a bit more time on making it realistic and not adding "2 hours later" it when to fast, or it was to short, he built his house and suddenly To be continued, for what? isn't it always that we are supposed to get excited for the next episode? instead of thinking.