[1.0.0] Little bit of animation

[Hesmiyu 491]

Heyy guys here is a 7 second clip of an animation I'm working on called "The Bridge Crossing"

 

What should I improve on this?

 

I already have 2 things I need to add;

Blinking

Torch particles

Flickering "Torch" light

Edited July 8, 2014 by Hesmiyu

[Peanutbutter Timelord 1.6k]

awesome!

[MrPops 624]

Really smooth!

[Shah 2.2k]

Whoa man. REALLY smooth.

[Ayhay 2.4k]

The person who didn't fall's head turning before the should be faster I think.

[Hesmiyu 491]

The person who didn't fall's head turning before the should be faster I think.

hooray, some criticism

 

He not turning his head fast as he isn't alert at that moment in time

[Ayhay 2.4k]

hooray, some criticism

 

He not turning his head fast as he isn't alert at that moment in time

In that case, dramatically slower ?

[Tobi PlaysMC 84]

the Girl should fall a Little bit different, but other than that ist awesome!

[Hesmiyu 491]

the Girl should fall a Little bit different, but other than that ist awesome!

In what way a little bit different?

[EndahGurl 2k]

Dat cliffhanger doe. Nice, can't think of any improvements lol

[TimeWolf 277]

*they see something unmentionable EVER TO THE WORLD, so all there is is a black blob with a troll face on it*