Everything posted by NotAn...
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Ooh i love tf2!
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Well usually people make test to show the community their work on a rig or a cycle, but here you just used the default walk cycle. I dont really see the point in making a test if you didnt make the thing you are testing yourself.
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The fog can be a big cube that is semi transparent and you can just make it bigger in width and boom you have good looking fog. And the 1st rule of critique doesnt even make sense... How can you not criticize people by not saying if it is good or bad?
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So.. Ok it is a crack texture. Yeah you can choose HD texture but then make the glass texture the same resolution too, because 2 differently sized images dont really go together that well. (Well ofc it is only my opinion but still). And i think it looks messy and unfinished because of the stretched textures, it would look like you have put more effort in to the work if it looks clean and finished. And maybe you sometimes need the side of the glass and then there are some awfully looking stretched textures.
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Well the epic start could have some improvements maybe some more stuff going on (a little bit so it doesnt look overdone) and if you have the letters slowly coming up then they should disappear. The camera movements could be done better and the lightning could be also done a bit better. Idk why but i just dont feel relaxed watching the start, it seems a bit boring, you could maybe add some more detail to the hallways so it is more interesting to watch and so it doesnt feel like they are the same corridors all of the time. The fog thing is moving weirdly, like a block at a time, it should be a bit more suttle. At the end i dont have the excitement or the thrill, because everything goes very slowly.
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I will tell you this. First of all even if the sides aren't usually visible that doesnt mean you should just leave it like that, it looks messy and unfinished. And if the window breaking textures are HD then the window textures should be HD too, but if you want everything minecraftyer then make a more pixelated look to the breaking texture.
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Please dont quote topics.
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Just so you know the flatlands are visible.
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It isnt a gif... Its a .jpg picture.
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Maybe try adding a bit more texture variety.
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Try making him a bit more smooth and bend him more, also the tnt should bounce a bit too.
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It would be nice if you actually stated which of the rigs is actually in the download and provide more pictures with different angles and also pictures of the rig by itself.
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Well idk you are that lazy that you cant even go to the bottom left corner and press a button...
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You sure like to overedit stuff...
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You could have atleast made the animation not lazy. And the video:
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Well you can work on your project for more days than one to get better results.
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It looks bland after looking at @Mike's wallpaper. Try toning the red down a bit and maybe posing the human a bit better
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Okay the torches look much better now. You could bend her body to look like she is preparing to run from the zombie the facial expressions look a bit unrealistic and i know you are pretty new to this but if you will have flatlands you wont get many likes (forums arent very keen on em) atleast put some trees there. You are getting better tho.
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It seems a bit boring, the posing is ok but could use some improvements. The torch could have a fire particle and the light could be a bit more oranger and there could be some light coming from the room behind the camera, not much but a little bit so it would feel warmer. She could have some better expressions. But overall it looks good for a starter.
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The edited is over-edited, it is very hard to see anything there. And the Non-edited is just.. meh. The sword has a high res texture while everything other does not it looks weird. Aaand the lightning is bland.
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Well... Why does the 1st one no fingers if the other two have em? The poses for the both people at the sides seem lazy, but the middle ones is ok. seem Glowing eyes and the title seem a bit cliche an overused. I guess that the 3rd edit looks the most pleasable, because the 2nd one has glowing eyes and in the 3rd one it doesnt look like they are standing on the ground. You could have credited the makers of the backgrounds.. I think they would appreciate it.
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What did i just watch.
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It looks good but it doesnt feel like its raining it usuly is foggy or darkisher than normal when its rainginf. But overall GREAT job.
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Its a schematic...
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I dont think that realistic rain drops fit mincrafty textures tho...
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