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    the bloom is ok ^^

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    also to upload an image with imgur

    click on get share link

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    copy BBCode link

    wHtS0jZ.jpg

     

    paste on you topic

    then you have 2 choices :

    • let it like this then submit (the image will appear when you'll submit the topic)

    • remove the img /img and the [     ] and press enter (the image will appear instantly on your draft (before you posted the topic))

     

    Thanks a lot! I'll be editing my first post so I can show the image

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    I can look for a different font after I ask my viewers, I don't really know many songs and that was the first that came up, and I used a few sound effects from sound bible but I didn't find very good ones. Also thanks for the comment mate!!

    Wait were the sound effects not good as in there weren't many that you would use or the quality was bad. there is a search bar on the right 

  3. That was good. I suggest using a different font than the default mineimator one as it doesn't look professional, but the animation was great. I would also recommend that you use a song relevant to this year or last year instead of turn down for what, as you are talking about your 2017 resolution, not 2015. also if you need sound effects that are free, then i usally use http://soundbible.com/ it's free and has a lot of sounds. I hope this helped

  4. Well, i have a lot of time on my hands, so I guess i"ll give you some feedback. At first, I had no idea what was going on. I know what you were getting at, with steve puting up a sign for his pig, but it was still very confusing. instead, you could have pulled up MS paint and quickly tiped "MISSING" then under it there could be a pig, which would not only be less confusing but also show that a pig was missing. Without the title, i would have had no idea what was going on. Second. The animation was crap! you call that walking? Mine imator has a god damn button to simulate walking so people don't have to make it them selves! It was way too slow, boring and lazy. You also used linear WAY to much. The camera action was boring and plain. A suggestion is when you end a scene, to more the camera a little bit so it is slightly moving during the scene. you could also change camera angles to keep it interesting. Just make the scenes much shorter, because people get the idea that steve is trying to find his pig in about 4 seconds per scene at most, but are easily board. Now, i admit, i was so board i didn't even watch the whole thing. Just at the end, were you show your name, DON'T USE F***ING ARIAL FOR YOUR FOUNT! it is unprofessional, lazy, and horrid. It is not that hard to change your fount. I suggest:

    Haettenschweiler

    Now, i have taken the liberty of making that pig poster for you.

    http://imgur.com/0fZeBlo

    No redo the animation. I promise you, it is worth it.

  5. Great animation! another way you can improve (besides the camera movement) is the scenery. don't get me wrong, the house they were in was pretty good, much better than the bland flat grass backgrounds that people use for useless "test" animations, but you could have done better. Now again, it was better than a lot of other people, but it wasn't the best. In animation, if you just settle for ok, then your whole animation will just be ok. It is the extra mile that great animators make that make them the best. Now, this is very hard to do, and while im trying to myself i still can't fully do it, but for you, me, and basically every everyone, practice makes perfect. And you should also add sounds.

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