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[ShadowUnicorn_Gaming 759]

I see what you are going for, it's a neat idea.  

 

 

Some quick tips for next time you make a render (Don't worry, this isn't me telling your render is bad ^^;)

For lighting, never use default Mine Imator lighting and don't use the default night time. Keep it day and change the colours in the background settings

Also, use a resource pack that seperates the 'glowing' parts from the 'non glowing' parts for torches

And finally, mess around with scenery and fog.

 

I'll link a few resources that'll help ya out ^^

SharpWind is a great inspiration.

 

Lighting - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EW0STx0lxKw

 

Selective Glow - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VvVvpeIF_WE

Link to his free to use resource: https://www.mediafire.com/file/klm6jp1cthuvi06/Sharps_Selective_Glow.zip/file

 

For scenery, I can't really tell ya what to do, Import some scenery, mess around with the background settings, it's all up to you ^^

I wish you all the best on your journey