20 second animation of me breathing.

[Monsieur Ryekseu 16]

One of the reasons I posted in test animations section: The title.

EDIT 1: Removed and modified keyframes, and added quality:

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Avoiding spoiler spam, v3 is here:

 

 

Tell me what you think, and don't sugarcoat it when it's actually terrible. Give me what you REALLY think, I don't care if you think it will hurt me, what doesn't kill me makes me better.

Edited September 5, 2016 by Monsieur Ryekseu
New version.

[Czai Knight 434]

Make the in and out breathing a lot LONGER. Just spread the keyframes far from each other but not to far.

Add some transitions such as ease and out (Or ease or out) to the breathing in and out.

 

[Mike 3.4k]

" Give me what you REALLY think " if you say so

Oh wow, a 20 animation loop of you breathing and easily accessible music. Doesn't look you put much effort into this at all, I don't think it can be classified as a test, much less an animation. I've always found breathing animations to be a little odd and unnecessary, because unless they're really subtle, it's not very realistic. Also the scenery and lighting are bland, we can see the end of the schematic.

(I almost forgot! Your skin is weird, it has a tuxedo, but emo hair, and then bright blue headphones )

[Monsieur Ryekseu 16]

1 minute ago, Mike said:

" Give me what you REALLY think " if you say so

Oh wow, a 20 animation loop of you breathing and easily accessible music. Doesn't look you put much effort into this at all, I don't think it can be classified as a test, much less an animation. I've always found breathing animations to be a little odd and unnecessary, because unless they're really subtle, it's not very realistic. Also the scenery and lighting are bland, we can see the end of the schematic.

(I almost forgot! Your skin is weird, it has a tuxedo, but emo hair, and then bright blue headphones )

That's what make me...me! Thank you for noticing though, most people would focus on what the character is doing first, rather than their looks.

[Mike 3.4k]

1 minute ago, Monsieur Ryekseu said:

That's what make me...me! Thank you for noticing though, most people would focus on what the character is doing first, rather than their looks.

Wait what...? I was focusing on what the character was doing.

[Monsieur Ryekseu 16]

Just now, Mike said:

Wait what...? I was focusing on what the character was doing.

**** i failed at interacting with people need to delete this topic and create a new one

[Monsieur Ryekseu 16]

Anyways, new video below the first one with a little bit of updates.

[Alinous Productions 681]

Tip: On all of the keyframes make the keyframe ease in and out sine. I would make it look much smoother