[animation] A story about 2 soldiers (slight blood warning)

[SDWAN 2.8k]

This has been approved by Aronan

I like this one better than my other animations

credit to Voxy's blood particles

Edited August 3, 2015 by SDWAN
Forgot to credit Voxy

[MineRocker Animations 1.4k]

"Alright let's begin..

The movement is good but the gun goes through soldiers' bodies at some points. Also the soldier at the right side moves his legs without taking them off the ground.

Depth of field is only used for a few seconds and then goes away, which is unnessesary. Some stuff about the audio editing is weird. (too sharp on some points)

Background ambience sound effects feels like it would be used for nighttime."

 

Just kidding btw.. the animation is actually pretty smooth and nice. 

That was just an impression of you...

Edited August 3, 2015 by MineRocker Animations

[SDWAN 2.8k]

"Alright let's begin..

The movement is good but the gun goes through soldiers' bodies at some points. Also the soldier at the right side moves his legs without taking them off the ground.

Depth of field is only used for a few seconds and then goes away, which is unnessesary. Some stuff about the audio editing is weird. (too sharp on some points)

Background ambience sound effects feels like it would be used for nighttime."

 

Just kidding btw.. the animation is actually pretty smooth and nice. 

That was just an impression of you...

Eh well.these are the types of things I like

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[Lord Cat 647]

So....

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

did he get shot in the foot or knee? either way that was entertaining

[SDWAN 2.8k]

did he get shot in the foot or knee? either way that was entertaining

ah shucks.( thaught is was pretty clear) well he got shot in the foot

So....

What...

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

ah shucks.( thaught is was pretty clear) well he got shot in the foot

thats what i thought, it just looked like the blood was coming out of his knee

[mrpix 48]

Cool movements and the soundtrack is good too (Soundtracks are sooooo important )

[MasterDima LastLight 14]

Gj. I didn't really get it, why did that soldier shot that other soldier??

 

[SDWAN 2.8k]

Cool movements and the soundtrack is good too (Soundtracks are sooooo important )

well this was meant to be like those sfx only shorts im experimenting with ._.

 

Gj. I didn't really get it, why did that soldier shot that other soldier??

 

ze left soldier shot an innocent bystander