WIP Intro.

[Speedyuki 8]

So I started to make an intro and I've got all the animation and images edited together. I was wondering if you guys could give me some feedback and maybe some suggestions on the music I should use and how I could make it any better?

Please keep in mind that this is my first animation and first forum post. So, sorry if this is in the wrong section and if nothing works.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B0jmDEDNugQ&feature=youtu.be

Edited September 2, 2013 by Speedyuki

[Señor Nueve 108]

nice........ +1

 

and uh... i suggest that to add more camera movements and and arm movements like goku does that KAMEHAME HA!

 

note: he bends his arms back in a ready pose similar to a hadouken

 

 

 

 

 

but its still nice

and the beam was just instantly long

 

try to use the resize or size or I dont know whats the name of that animation but try to use it

[Ayhay 2.4k]

(Not bad but here's my criticism,a nd when I say need, should, have, It's not really that it's just a possibility )

 

You need to skip a lot of things. It should flash into Goku already in the position for Kameamea. Maybe slight arm movements, but to show some prepping action, it should flash or give off light, then the beam should hit and make the words contrasting on the material. Black board, white text and then fade into your normal text. I like the end. It should really last 10 seconds maximum because anything longer is a bit boring to watch.