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[blingirl 64]

Hellooo, Blingirl here!

Um... I have nothing to say today in this bit.

Lets just get to the wallpaper, shall we?

[Kazuki 62]

The green light doesn't really make any sense. Or there's maybe something that the character is holding that isn't visible. If you're placing something that's reaally worth the attention and kinda changes something huge on the image. Show it a bit, maybe change the angle of the camera or the rotation of the item.

I noticed that you blurred the edges too. It's a bit overdone that it looks smudged.

As for the posing... The guy that jump didn't really make any sense. Why? Because I can't see why would he jump like that if the enderdragon is too far away. Maybe he's dash jumping something? If he is, then you need to work on your pose. Because he doesn't look like he's dash jumping or something. It doesn't make any sense why would Alex craft in the middle of the war. I mean, if you're saying "She really needs to". Then at the back of a player should be a good spot to place her, and make all of them covering her.

As for the whole image itself, it really looks empty, maybe it's because the characters are so far to each other. Just an opinion I guess

You need to practice on your lighting.. Good luck! No heartbreaks, just a fair critique

[blingirl 64]

22 hours ago, Kazuki said:

The green light doesn't really make any sense. Or there's maybe something that the character is holding that isn't visible. If you're placing something that's reaally worth the attention and kinda changes something huge on the image. Show it a bit, maybe change the angle of the camera or the rotation of the item.

I noticed that you blurred the edges too. It's a bit overdone that it looks smudged.

As for the posing... The guy that jump didn't really make any sense. Why? Because I can't see why would he jump like that if the enderdragon is too far away. Maybe he's dash jumping something? If he is, then you need to work on your pose. Because he doesn't look like he's dash jumping or something. It doesn't make any sense why would Alex craft in the middle of the war. I mean, if you're saying "She really needs to". Then at the back of a player should be a good spot to place her, and make all of them covering her.

As for the whole image itself, it really looks empty, maybe it's because the characters are so far to each other. Just an opinion I guess

You need to practice on your lighting.. Good luck! No heartbreaks, just a fair critique

Right.... I see where you're coming from buuuutt...

You can see what the man is holding, and where the light is. spacing to create realism and the alex because... because alex.

[Kazuki 62]

2 hours ago, blingirl said:

Right.... I see where you're coming from buuuutt...

You can see what the man is holding, and where the light is. spacing to create realism and the alex because... because alex.

What is the man holding? It's not that visible.

Edited May 17, 2016 by Kazuki

[blingirl 64]

18 hours ago, Kazuki said:

What is the man holding? It's not that visible.

let me circle it

 

[Kazuki 62]

19 hours ago, blingirl said:

let me circle it

 

Like I said, what is it? By it's not that visible, I meant that the Item is not visible enough to be recognize.

 

Edited May 19, 2016 by Kazuki