First Person Herobrine Fight

[Slayer3201 15]

This is my first animation. Tell me what i should improve.

 

 

[Skiedude 288]

That was actually really good camera work and really good 1st person camera work. I would start working on the scenery more. Get some mountains or something to cover the borders of the map. Maybe make it night and light up the ground with some scary colored torches. 

[drago292 0]

This was actually really good. Here are my suggestions

 

1. Scenery, or like Skie said, make it night time with scary torhes.

 

2. Use the transitions and set it to 'In and Out' so its smoother and a little more realistic.

 

3. Goes a little fast on falling, and you wouldn't just fall even if it was Herobrine.

 

Overall, very good. Better than I've ever done.

 

 

[yxxy 8]

Quite good

I guess all that I can say besides that was already said, so I'll just leave it there!

[Slayer3201 15]

Thanks for the support guys! I am making a 2nd one right now! I will post it on another topic when its finished!

[Redgodzill 13]

Change the title and remove (epic minecraft animation), make the time to night, and change the lighting inside the small underground room.

[JollyGiant13 3]

I enjoyed this animation, I like how you did  your "First Person".

[gawainsonic 1]

Looks good but heres some things you can do

 

1. Make more of a scenery

2. Night Time would make it better

3. Sound (Which can be annoying to add)

 

But Pretty nice job

Im working on my Assassins Creed Animation