Goodbye Season 2- Episode 1 Part 2

[deedog2000 151]

I was hesitant to post this, but here it is. It doesn't have sound cuz I was rushed, and you can tell I gave up towards the end and just tried to get it out on time.

The first portion I found was really bad, but it only got better with time, up until I lost one of the clips on my old pc after losing my backup USB. (Go me)

If I could change anything, it would be a few things really.

 

- The second half

- Lack of sounds

- Some fine details

- The dang rain effects

- The first few scenes

- Some of the story elements

 

I am new to after effects and am still learning about animation, so if you have any feedback, let me know, constructive criticism is highly valued.

Edited January 27, 2020 by deedog2000

[Gfamleit 249]

lighting could use some work

[deedog2000 151]

17 minutes ago, Gfamleit said:

lighting could use some work

thanks, I will take that into account when I work on the next one