Mae_949 [2K]

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Another fun wallpaper for Mae_949 Feedback Appreciated~! 

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It seems a bit boring, the posing is ok but could use some improvements. The torch could have a fire particle and the light could be a bit more oranger and there could be some light coming from the room behind the camera, not much but a little bit so it would feel warmer. She could have some better expressions. But overall it looks good for a starter.

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1 minute ago, NotAn... said:

It seems a bit boring, the posing is ok but could use some improvements. The torch could have a fire particle and the light could be a bit more oranger and there could be some light coming from the room behind the camera, not much but a little bit so it would feel warmer. She could have some better expressions. But overall it looks good for a starter.

 

thanks for the tips~! i'll remember those~!