Safety video parody

[Xada 3]

Remember to maintain safe etique, or you may turn yourself or your coworkers into Furries.

 

[sahdow2013ac 52]

Uh?

[Zapstrike 28]

It's not terrible, but here are some tips to make your work a lot better:

1. At the start, there's no anticipation/build-up to the run. It just sorta happens. Some build-up could really make the run look a bit more realistic.

2. As for the falling, that just kinda happens too. Also, how does one fall backwards when running forwards, especially with how they were running?

3. The extended ladder texture... Need I say more? (Try to copy and paste ladders instead and parent them together).

4. There's not many easing ins and easing outs either. Try add easing to make the animation look smoother.

5. The movements don't look very fluent at all. You could try record yourself moving around, then animate it the best you can into Mine-imator using your footage as a reference.

6. Lack of sound. Sound is literally everywhere, why not try add more sfx? It doesn't have to be a lot, even some background sounds, ambience, or music could do the trick.

 

Overall, not bad, but it could be better. Good luck for the next animations you make!