A random animation with some VFX

[HeroTheDisgrace 1]

I made this vid randomly but ig I need some critical advice.

 

Edited July 17, 2021 by HeroTheDisgrace

[BABYCORPSE0 0]

Its actually really good ive been doing animations for a very long time and it all looks so good but you might have to work a bit on the camera control and movement

Edited July 21, 2021 by BABYCORPSE0

[BABYCORPSE0 0]

animation wise i lovee the running and slow motion animation you added on to it i really do like it but when he goes to jump make sure he shows a bit of "about to jump" force if you understand what i mean lol but yea make him bend a bit before jumping and also add a quick snap of after jumping to show he repulsed off and itll look smoother. Try to keep the movements not look snappy and quick is what im trynna say also i really like the zombie falling down and the smoothness of the animation when he hits the ground. (im literally helping as much as i can lmao im that one person that takes the animations and helping others serious lmao). but anywho i really do like the entire thing even with the tinniest of flaws it still came out wonderfulLet me know if i helped in anyway ill be glad to hear if i did or didnt

Edited July 21, 2021 by BABYCORPSE0

[HeroTheDisgrace 1]

On 7/21/2021 at 10:48 PM, BABYCORPSE0 said:

animation wise i lovee the running and slow motion animation you added on to it i really do like it but when he goes to jump make sure he shows a bit of "about to jump" force if you understand what i mean lol but yea make him bend a bit before jumping and also add a quick snap of after jumping to show he repulsed off and itll look smoother. Try to keep the movements not look snappy and quick is what im trynna say also i really like the zombie falling down and the smoothness of the animation when he hits the ground. (im literally helping as much as i can lmao im that one person that takes the animations and helping others serious lmao). but anywho i really do like the entire thing even with the tinniest of flaws it still came out wonderfulLet me know if i helped in anyway ill be glad to hear if i did or didnt

yeah i noticed that lol