Jump to content
Message added by TopicLocker3000

This topic was automatically locked after 6 months of inactivity. If you are the topic owner, please contact a moderator to have it unlocked.

Recommended Posts

Noice! 

My Favorite Fast Food when I was a kid is BURGERS! And I'm still love Burgers Until Now. 

Suggestions from me:Make the Main Character, And The Burgers which is Subject, And Object Thing. You need to add more Contrast between them,Just In case People will be able to see easily which is the burger, and which is the subject or Main character. 

Link to post
Share on other sites

The lighting should be brighter, since the wallpaper is quite dark. I'd also try making the camera position more interesting and the character poses slightly more dynamic (however they are fine as they are). The background could also have more detail put in, whether it's more props like tables or a different build altogether.

 

I'd say this is pretty good, though. I always find the edge glow to be a nice effect personally. There are many places where it can be improved, but overall, it's nice to look at.

Link to post
Share on other sites

Guest
This topic is now closed to further replies.
  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

  • Create New...