Short Combo Test

[AJFM AnimateMC 10]

 

Just Practicing Some Keyframes my Sorry For The Blood Particles it looks ugly XD

[Samuelzito 1]

that looks sick, ngl

Edited December 27, 2020 by Samuelzito

[AJFM AnimateMC 10]

3 hours ago, Samuelzito said:

that looks sick, ngl

Thanks Btw it took me 3 days to animate thanks to my laziness and addiction to games lol  

Edited December 27, 2020 by AJFM AnimateMC

[TwoToRule 506]

Steve's actions transition between each other in a linear fashion. Try to overlap them more to improve the flow. There shouldn't be a definable point where one action ends and another one starts. Other than that, the animation is good.

 

The intro, though, takes up half of the video. In short videos like this, it would be better to not have an intro. Intros, I feel, should be reserved for larger, more official videos, or for compilations of a bunch of animation tests. The intro itself looks really good, except for one part where the flatlands are visible for a moment. Try turning off the ground, fog, and clouds in the background settings and set the sky color to be the same as the color as the plane. This should fix this problem and also allow you to remove the blue plane behind the rest of the intro.

[AJFM AnimateMC 10]

9 hours ago, TwoToRule said:

Steve's actions transition between each other in a linear fashion. Try to overlap them more to improve the flow. There shouldn't be a definable point where one action ends and another one starts. Other than that, the animation is good.

 

The intro, though, takes up half of the video. In short videos like this, it would be better to not have an intro. Intros, I feel, should be reserved for larger, more official videos, or for compilations of a bunch of animation tests. The intro itself looks really good, except for one part where the flatlands are visible for a moment. Try turning off the ground, fog, and clouds in the background settings and set the sky color to be the same as the color as the plane. This should fix this problem and also allow you to remove the blue plane behind the rest of the intro.

Thanks for the advice ill keep that in mind

yah my bad about the intro i should have uploaded the other one with no intro the net so slow so i couldn't upload it