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I originally posted this as a contest submission, however I want to expand upon the animation. I don't intend upon modifying this animation, but to use its feedback to generate better quality animations.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=28KcgCCOw_8

 

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I've seen the video and here's my feedback.

  • You put too much weight in your walk cycle.
  • Running scene is very off, It's sliding and I don't think you'd need a Run with that speed. Try a walk then slowly transition it into a run.
  • Again sliding once he backed off.
  • Alpha Glitch.
  • I can barely hear the sfx but still audible.
  • The lighting is simple but you can improve.

Overall it's good for starters.

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Here's You need to fix:

  • Walk Cycle to slow,and too much lagging movement.
  • Lighting need to be more Colorfull(It depends on your moods,and Theme of it).
  • Make More Overlapping Actions,So the animation it self looks more smoother.

I Give Ya 6/10.  Overall Like MoltenLapizza Said. It's Good For Starters.

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