CSX train splits in half

[CraftyFoxe 225]

How did I do this time guys?

[pilyglot 23]

Overall it looks good to me; the animation of the train and such look natural, and the way the car kind of bounces down a little when it stops is a nice detail. I also like the use of camera angles to highlight what is happening.

The only things I noticed that were kinda off (and obviously I'm not an animation expert) were the tint of the car windshield (windshields aren't usually that dark, and it obscures the character somewhat) and the way the firemen walk; making a custom walk cycle does take some time but it's definitely worth it, and if you save the keyframes you can adapt them for use in multiple projects, and it really adds to the overall smoothness of your animation.

But as I said, it does look nice overall; looking forward to seeing what you make next .

[CraftyFoxe 225]

1 hour ago, pilyglot said:

Overall it looks good to me; the animation of the train and such look natural, and the way the car kind of bounces down a little when it stops is a nice detail. I also like the use of camera angles to highlight what is happening.

The only things I noticed that were kinda off (and obviously I'm not an animation expert) were the tint of the car windshield (windshields aren't usually that dark, and it obscures the character somewhat) and the way the firemen walk; making a custom walk cycle does take some time but it's definitely worth it, and if you save the keyframes you can adapt them for use in multiple projects, and it really adds to the overall smoothness of your animation.

But as I said, it does look nice overall; looking forward to seeing what you make next .

Fair enough, I do agree probably the guy inside was a bit hard to see since its so dark and custom walk cycle is one thing I need to work on for a long time

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