Concept of our 3 Collab

[Mercury 752]

When @Frost*'s new wallpaper Beautiful World came out, I was the head of posing, mapping, and skins, so I made this concept and sent the file over Frost*. The change was significant, and yeah, this wallpaper won't be as awesome without the 3-way collab.

[HeYoNia 1.6k]

Prefer "beautiful world" one, this one doesn't even have a balance between contrast and brightness which just ruins the tone. It's overly saturated and the lightrays are just meh. The lightray should be the only light source in this area or probably the brightest in this area but notice how everything else is well lit except for the blurred backround.

[Mercury 752]

Just now, HeYoNia said:

Prefer "beautiful world" one, this one doesn't even have a balance between contrast and brightness which just ruins the tone. It's overly saturated and the lightrays are just meh. The lightray should be the only light source in this area or probably the brightest in this area but notice how everything else is well lit except for the blurred backround.

I know. That was the concept. But then, Frost changed the tone, contrast, and brightness. You guys do know I am terrible at making things shine properly.

[ShotU 948]

2 hours ago, MineWallpaper said:

I know. That was the concept. But then, Frost changed the tone, contrast, and brightness. You guys do know I am terrible at making things shine properly.

You'll get better with time, just keep learning and taking note of other criticism. That's how I was able to make my wallpapers as good as they are now. It may be harsh, but its helpful.

[HeYoNia 1.6k]

10 minutes ago, ShotUAnimations said:

You'll get better with time, just keep learning and taking note of other criticism. That's how I was able to make my wallpapers as good as they are now. It may be harsh, but its helpful.

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[DragonPixel 546]

that's pretty good 

[__Mine__ 1.9k]

I'd definitely say this is one of your better renders. There's still some improvement that could be made to the saturation and lighting, but at least this isn't "MY EYES"-level brightness like all your other renders are.

You're definitely improving. Keep it up!

[Mercury 752]

2 hours ago, __Mine__ said:

I'd definitely say this is one of your better renders. There's still some improvement that could be made to the saturation and lighting, but at least this isn't "MY EYES"-level brightness like all your other renders are.

You're definitely improving. Keep it up!

Thank you!