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1 minute ago, Phyre Productions said:

I like the concept for the animation, but the execution could be a lot better in my opinion. The text at the beginning fades away instantly and it's impossible to read, plus it's parented to his head which is a bit weird. I'd probably either not have text and make it more implied what he is doing, or just do the text a different way. The animation itself is really linear, you can use transitions in Mine-Imator to have more smooth movement. The pose isn't that good either, try to bend his knees slightly, rotate everything out very slightly, bend and rotate his body a bit, etc. I would also try to show clouds, they would make the viewer understand how high up this is too, you could even make the clouds be under Steve, that would be cool. Sound effects are very important to have in an animation, even if it seems like there's none you could add.

Thank you for the suggestions  :D

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