Task and Quest [Comic] Page 21-25

[BonkJobBot 259]

 Meanwhile in the elevator in Peter's world.......

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[Rollo 3.2k]

I like how this has more content per topic than other comics. Some that I see are just a single page. One thing I'd like to say though is instead of using "door opening/closing sounds" you could get creative and use things like "schwoop" or "shvvvvt". Idk, what you use technically works but it could definitely be a little more creative or comic book-y if you'd like. Good stuff though, I like the comics.

[MojangYang 918]

Hmm...

the red letters are quite hard to see.