Towards the Front Line

[Arconi 36]

i've been busy doing some school works but i hope you like my basic wallpaper

 

[XanderTheV 214]

Bunch of SWAT Steves carrying real-life FN Scar while the helicopters are blocky...
That's a conflicting style though.

I like the composition, but i think your camera is off, i think it's by accident or you didn't notice it. But the camera is too much to the left, shift it a little bit to the right so the objects will be centered, and they will align to rule-of-third lines.

It might get better if you add the third helicopter (just copy it) and put it at right above the middle Steve, it would be a neat composition.

The sun seems to be behind the mountains, yet the lighting came from the right. I think i can ignore that one, because if the light follows the sun direction, it would be hard to see.

The posing could be improved. The right and left soldier could take a running pose while the middle one could crouch and aim.

I like the render, i can feel the pacing of them marching towards the frontline. And the color saturation is just right... not too much, just... right.
Keep it up! I might call it "Towards the Front Line" in my opinion based on what i see from the wallpaper itself.

And @Frost* i think you forgot to follow this one.

Upvote!

Edited October 18, 2019 by XanderTheV

[XanderTheV 214]

14 minutes ago, OzFalcon said:

Frost doesn't always need to follow every topic, nor do you need to mention him for an almost pointless reason

uuuh.... ok

Edited October 18, 2019 by XanderTheV

[Arconi 36]

1 hour ago, XanderTheV said:

Bunch of SWAT Steves carrying real-life FN Scar while the helicopters are blocky...
That's a conflicting style though.

I like the composition, but i think your camera is off, i think it's by accident or you didn't notice it. But the camera is too much to the left, shift it a little bit to the right so the objects will be centered, and they will align to rule-of-third lines.

It might get better if you add the third helicopter (just copy it) and put it at right above the middle Steve, it would be a neat composition.

The sun seems to be behind the mountains, yet the lighting came from the right. I think i can ignore that one, because if the light follows the sun direction, it would be hard to see.

The posing could be improved. The right and left soldier could take a running pose while the middle one could crouch and aim.

I like the render, i can feel the pacing of them marching towards the frontline. And the color saturation is just right... not too much, just... right.
Keep it up! I might call it "Towards the Front Line" in my opinion based on what i see from the wallpaper itself.

And @Frost* i think you forgot to follow this one.

Upvote!

i couldn't find a more realistic helicopter rig

 i'll apply the things that you've said thank you for pointing out my mistakes i will improve in no time

THANK YOU!!

[XanderTheV 214]

3 minutes ago, Arconi said:

i couldn't find a more realistic helicopter rig

Or... find a blockier FN-Scar instead.

No problem.

[Arconi 36]

Just now, XanderTheV said:

Or... find a blockier FN-Scar instead.

No problem.

i found one but the link's dead tho

[Draco63 645]

wow! this is amazing!

[Arconi 36]

11 hours ago, Draco63 said:

wow! this is amazing!

THANK YOU!!!

[Mercury 752]

Annnnnnd say hello to Showcase, boi.