Minecarts and Train

[MojangYang 918]

Hi guys I’m not dead inside! First actual animations in a month. My skills are still intermediate.

constructive criticisms are as usual, appreciated. Just don’t complain about the sound quality, still haven’t mastered audacity.

 

Thanks to @rakaela for the train rig, but it would be better if the items are correctly organized in folders and the rotation points of wheels centered lol.

Edited October 2, 2019 by MojangYang

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

Did somebody say TRAIN?

[Frost 3.3k]

I love where your going with this! Comedy was awesome.

Now, I would recommend working on the lighting, watch some of SharpWInd's tutorials for help on that.

Idle motion looked great. Your character animation was pretty smooth.

Facial expressions were pretty good too, but try adding some blinking or squinting. Pupil movement looked fine.

Also try not to use very high-res blood textures, try to keep it more blocky.

Camera shake was good too.

Assets looked good too.

 

Very nice work, for you! Just keep practicing.

Edited October 2, 2019 by Frost*

[MojangYang 918]

50 minutes ago, Frost* said:

I love where your going with this! Comedy was awesome.

Now, I would recommend working on the lighting, watch some of SharpWInd's tutorials for help on that.

Idle motion looked great. Your character animation was pretty smooth.

Facial expressions were pretty good too, but try adding some blinking or squinting. Pupil movement looked fine.

Also try not to use very high-res blood textures, try to keep it more blocky.

Camera shake was good too.

Assets looked good too.

 

Very nice work, for you! Just keep practicing.

Thank you! This means a lot. Best constructive criticism I’ve seen in a while!

[Dignity 140]

This is funny

although I don't really understand the animation, it did make me laugh 

nice one man I would like to see more