Hallow's Eve

[Mercury 752]

Halloween's coming up! 

9redwoods ventured to the forest in attempt to win Frost*'s bet of staying there for an hour. Little does he know it was the legendary Hallow's territory he stepped in.

[Frost 3.3k]

Here are tips:

I wouldn't recommend using that intense of glow, and definitely wouldn't recommend making the jack-o-lantern so huge. 

Posing could be improved a little; try not to add extreme positions for the legs, spreading them that far apart looks unnatural.

Also, that skeleton head is floating.

Also also, the jack-o-lantern is too bright for it to be transparent. We can see the moon through it.

Camera could be straightened slightly, that much tilt isn't necessary for this kind of view.

Maybe turn your SSAO down some.

 

With practice, you will become better. Everyone takes the steps.

Edited September 30, 2019 by Frost*

[Mercury 752]

Gotcha, but the floating? Nope.

[Frost 3.3k]

2 minutes ago, MineWallpaper said:

Gotcha, but the floating? Nope.

Make sure to quote whoever you are replying too.

 

I guess I can see it now, I think the strong SSAO creates the illusion.

[Mercury 752]

I haven't used any SSAO

[Frost 3.3k]

1 minute ago, MineWallpaper said:

I haven't used any SSAO

Please quote me by pressing the button.

MI has SSAO on by default, you can lower it in the render settings.

[Mercury 752]

28 minutes ago, Frost* said:

Please quote me by pressing the button.

MI has SSAO on by default, you can lower it in the render settings.

Oh.