Death (4k Cinematic)

[Ian_The_One 834]

Warning Violent

Spoiler

 

[Frost 3.3k]

That's kinda dark. And the character isn't looking down.

Also, what is he holding? How is anybody dying?

[Ian_The_One 834]

1 minute ago, Frost* said:

That's kinda dark. And the character isn't looking down.

Also, what is he holding? How is anybody dying?

the character is looking into the void while cleaning his pistol

[Frost 3.3k]

1 minute ago, Ian_The_One said:

the character is looking into the void while cleaning his pistol

Ohhh...it's a kind of hard to tell if it's a pistol...

[Ian_The_One 834]

4 minutes ago, Frost* said:

Ohhh...it's a kind of hard to tell if it's a pistol...

[Frost 3.3k]

Just now, Ian_The_One said:

Ah. But you can't see that much in the render.

[Ian_The_One 834]

Just now, Frost* said:

Ah. But you can't see that much in the render.

your not supossed to

[Frost 3.3k]

Just now, Ian_The_One said:

your not supossed to

Ok yes I know, I meant in the render you can't see that much of the gun, and because of the b/w it could appear to be something else.

[Mercury 752]

Tbh, the wallpaper is too gory. I could have have a murderer pointing his Glock to a victim.

[Ian_The_One 834]

10 minutes ago, MineWallpaper said:

Tbh, the wallpaper is too gory. I could have have a murderer pointing his Glock to a victim.

OMG,you're right next time ill make a person torn in half with his guts all over the floor,that will be less gory thanks for the critsism,this is tolltally not your personal opinion.

[Bronze 303]

For me it's cool

[Mercury 752]

LOL.

[Frost 3.3k]

1 hour ago, Ian_The_One said:

OMG,you're right next time ill make a person torn in half with his guts all over the floor,that will be less gory thanks for the critsism,this is tolltally not your personal opinion.

Lmao m8 I'm following you

[Mercury 752]

That was funny.

[Skjold 7.6k]

"warning violent"

the wallpaper's too dark to see anything anyways

[Cryptic Runner 2.3k]

3 hours ago, Skjold said:

"warning violent"

the wallpaper's too dark to see anything anyways

that's because there's no background though

[Mercury 752]

Wow, what a amazing discovery, Cubic!

[Kwazedilla 1.6k]

you do define your subject well with his white clothes contrasting against the black background, so that's pretty good. while the dead character and the gun should rightfully not be the focus of the wallpaper, they are both obscured to the point where it's very hard to see both: the gun because the towel is blocking most of it from view, the dead character because it blends in with the background and is being distorted by the camera. generally you want your audience to immediately tell what's going on in the wallpaper so it's important to make sure to have a clear focus while maintaining secondary focuses that complement the wallpaper as a whole.

nothing that good camera positioning can't fix, however. personally, i would move the camera to the opposite side of the scene so that the gun is more clear to see. perhaps also position the camera a little behind the dead character's head so you make the main character more imposing and powerful

[HeYoNia 1.6k]

I have no idea what's going on, my first impressions were he was rubbing a potato on a torch

[Mercury 752]

Lol, the gun looked like a stone.

[ItsZaaki 271]

Camera probably needed a better angle tbh

Edited September 24, 2019 by ItsZaaki

[Me for some reasons 35]

imma follow u now, u threaten me with that pistol.