Sleep Deprivation [wallpaper]

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There may or may not be some recent frustrating events that led to me making this.   (remember to bring travel beds with you in minecraft multiplayer, losers)

 

I hope you like it, and if you have any criticism I would love to hear it.

 

kthanksbye

[Kwazedilla 1.6k]

not bad, scenery is pretty detailed; lighting and posing are all right

while you do obey the rule of thirds, i do feel (personal opinion) that you should instead have steve take up an entire third of the screen, from the top to the bottom. that way more attention is drawn to steve and the scene feels more dramatic. while we're at it you can also play with the dutch angle or increase the FoV to heighten the tension. if you really want to go all-out, edit the phantoms in post to add speed lines or a blur effect to make it seem like they're swooping in for the kill

perhaps your fringe is a little too strong, but i do like the effect anyways so personal preference