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OwO, you're getting better! You're posing is almost there, and your lighting is looking more professional. Just keep practicing.

This is a scene where fringe and lens flare actually fit. Pretty cool idea too. Maybe just have the camera show more of the pillagers.

I like where you're going, @TexasTony04.

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13 minutes ago, Frost* said:

OwO, you're getting better! You're posing is almost there, and your lighting is looking more professional. Just keep practicing.

This is a scene where fringe and lens flare actually fit. Pretty cool idea too. Maybe just have the camera show more of the pillagers.

I like where you're going, @TexasTony04.

Thanks! That means a lot.

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20 minutes ago, OzFalcon said:

There's too much tension around the iron golem. First off, his body is facing the right of frame and he's also positioned more into the right of frame as well. If you read up more about a thing called the Rule Of Thirds, there's an occasionally unexplained section detailing that characters look best when they're facing towards the more empty side of frame (for example, a character on the right of frame would look best facing the left of frame). Second off, the sun and lens flare seems to be awkwardly positioned and cut off. You could've moved both of those more towards the left where the sky is more open and empty, ready to be filled to possibly create a more pleasing shot. These things come through naturally with time, but you have to think about how you're going to maximise the amount of space you have to work with in a shot.

Thanks. Good points.

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