Making a Dinner (4K)

[jakubg1 440]

So I've tried to do @Jake_28's style today, and in my opinion it turned out pretty well.

Credit to him for a few tips, his skin and a modification of my skin.

Old version that lasted 45 minutes:

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Feedback and criticism appreciated.

Edited September 10, 2019 by jakubg1
Posing fixed

[Frost 3.3k]

Posing seems off.

Also, due to shadows, it looks as though there is a light source in the other room, which is not visible.

[jakubg1 440]

1 minute ago, Frost* said:

Posing seems off.

Also, due to shadows, it looks as though there is a light source in the other room, which is not visible.

The no-bend style is intentional.

And yes, there's a torch behind a door and it isn't visible. Otherwise, the left part of the wallpaper would look bland.

[Frost 3.3k]

2 minutes ago, jakubg1 said:

The no-bend style is intentional.

And yes, there's a torch behind a door and it isn't visible. Otherwise, the left part of the wallpaper would look bland.

I know the no-bend was intentional, but it still seems unbalanced.

Fair enough. For this style, the lighting is pretty good.

[jakubg1 440]

35 minutes ago, Frost* said:

I know the no-bend was intentional, but it still seems unbalanced.

Fair enough. For this style, the lighting is pretty good.

Posing fixed. Check it out and tell me if it's better now.

Edited September 10, 2019 by jakubg1

[Frost 3.3k]

7 minutes ago, jakubg1 said:

Posing fixed. Check it out and tell me if it's better now.

Oh! Nice! This posing is much better. Thank you, sir. A nice wallpaper you have there.

[9redwoods 3.8k]

That ambiance is way too blue. It should really be gray. Good job overall, though.

[KrisFirebolt 969]

Where's the dinner?

[jakubg1 440]

8 hours ago, KrisFirebolt said:

Where's the dinner?

On the furnace behind the window (two cooked beef items). I didn't have a better idea to make the dinner more visible, sorry

Edited September 11, 2019 by jakubg1

[KrisFirebolt 969]

That's alright, thanks for the update ^^