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[LigMcYt 22]

Edited September 3, 2019 by LigMcYt

[Kwazedilla 1.6k]

very pretty! like the use of ambient/night lighting to invoke the coldness and desolation of outer space

i see what you're doing with the point lights in front of wheatly and space core's eye, but space core's could be improved. perhaps increase the spot radius a little so that it covers  its entire face

you could also probably follow the rule of thirds, perhaps move the cores to the left a little (somehow that looks a little more pleasing to the eye)

a bit nitpicky of me but i'd love to see you put this scene in a space skybox, but then again you want space to appear empty so i see where you're going with the plain night sky

[LigMcYt 22]

11 minutes ago, Kwazedilla said:

very pretty! like the use of ambient/night lighting to invoke the coldness and desolation of outer space

i see what you're doing with the point lights in front of wheatly and space core's eye, but space core's could be improved. perhaps increase the spot radius a little so that it covers  its entire face

you could also probably follow the rule of thirds, perhaps move the cores to the left a little (somehow that looks a little more pleasing to the eye)

a bit nitpicky of me but i'd love to see you put this scene in a space skybox, but then again you want space to appear empty so i see where you're going with the plain night sky

thx 

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What are they?

[Kwazedilla 1.6k]

5 hours ago, ... said:

What are they?

only some of the most infamous of characters from the greatest of games