what do you think of how this seen looks

[DragonPixel 546]

dose this seen look any good I need feedback.

I render some 

https://streamable.com/ynt7q

Edited July 9, 2019 by DragonPixel

[TwoToRule 506]

waaaaay too dark.

[Yoshifan33 182]

1. "Scene".

2. The lights are completely random.

3. What is the setup of the scene? Someone walking around a house?

4. The position of the camera mixed with the character movement makes his right arm appear nonexistent.

5. The light in the middle doesn't emit any shadows from the couch(?).

6. While on the subject of the lights, lights don't naturally only shine on one spot. The surrounding areas should be at least partially illuminated.

Edited July 8, 2019 by Yoshifan33

[DragonPixel 546]

 

 

1 minute ago, Yoshifan33 said:

1. "Scene".

2. The lights are completely random.

3. What is the setup of the scene? Someone walking around a house?

4. The position of the camera mixed with the character movement makes his right arm appear nonexistent.

5. The light in the middle doesn't emit any shadows from the couch(?).

they are not there are scorsese thay are just cut of in this seen 

2 minutes ago, Twotorule said:

waaaaay too dark.

ok

Edited July 8, 2019 by DragonPixel

[Yoshifan33 182]

8 minutes ago, DragonPixel said:

they are not there are scorsese thay are just cut of in this seen

scorsese?

[TheXKing360 223]

Detective Conan is trying to explain how the murder has done his crime 

Edited July 10, 2019 by TheXKing360

[DragonPixel 546]

11 hours ago, Yoshifan33 said:

scorsese?

yes

[DragonPixel 546]

 

it this better

 

13 hours ago, Yoshifan33 said:

1. "Scene".

2. The lights are completely random.

3. What is the setup of the scene? Someone walking around a house?

4. The position of the camera mixed with the character movement makes his right arm appear nonexistent.

5. The light in the middle doesn't emit any shadows from the couch(?).

6. While on the subject of the lights, lights don't naturally only shine on one spot. The surrounding areas should be at least partially illuminated.

13 hours ago, Twotorule said:

waaaaay too dark.