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One of the panels is repeated. Also I would recommend adding speech bubbles to this instead of boxes. I used boxes for a while, but the bubbles make it look much better. 

Another thing, even though you did number the order the dialogue goes in, it is kind of annoying to the reader to look at every box to find which one goes first. A couple times, I did end up reading them incorrectly from normal reading habits.

Use this guide. I made it specifically for situations like this xP

Hope I could help! Keep up the work!

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23 hours ago, Hagus said:

One of the panels is repeated. Also I would recommend adding speech bubbles to this instead of boxes. I used boxes for a while, but the bubbles make it look much better. 

Another thing, even though you did number the order the dialogue goes in, it is kind of annoying to the reader to look at every box to find which one goes first. A couple times, I did end up reading them incorrectly from normal reading habits.

Use this guide. I made it specifically for situations like this xP

Hope I could help! Keep up the work!

thnx

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