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[MojangYang 918]

How can I improve this test animation?

please tell me, thanks!

[WAZZL3 369]

ill give u 1 hint, dont use the default run

[9redwoods 3.8k]

3 hours ago, WAZZL3 said:

ill give u 1 hint, dont use the default run

It's not the default run.

Anyways about the animation, try to reduce foot sliding when he runs. Also, the camera movement is a little annoying because none of the objects are in the correct place in the frame.

[Cryptic Runner 2.3k]

woah, is that guy made out of the softest jello ever?

[MojangYang 918]

3 hours ago, Cubic Ralsei said:

woah, is that guy made out of the softest jello ever?

Which guy? The guy who got cut in the face is weak and never fought before. If you are talking about the yellow and green guy (my character) then Idk what your talking about XD

[Cryptic Runner 2.3k]

1 minute ago, MojangYang said:

Which guy? The guy who got cut in the face is weak and never fought before. If you are talking about the yellow and green guy (my character) then Idk what your talking about XD

yep i'm talking about the guy being cut in the face

[MojangYang 918]

3 hours ago, 9redwoods said:

It's not the default run.

Anyways about the animation, try to reduce foot sliding when he runs. Also, the camera movement is a little annoying because none of the objects are in the correct place in the frame.

When I first made it it looked too slow so I shrunk the space by dragging the key frames closer to each other and no it looked a bit UN-smooth if that’s what you mean

[Zarfel 116]

Its not that bad, just make the sword slashing part exaggerating and the running part is a bit slow.

[Ricky T 77]

not bad, imo the animation is not exagurated enough, too slow and the run is a bit linear. also just a tip with the camera try using the instant transition when fast actions are happening, easier to caputre the important bits since you know, they're fast. i'll upvote tho not bad