Call My Bluff [4K Character Render]

[IraelianEnergy 80]

My second attempt at a normal character render. I honestly couldn't get the lighting right on this one, but other than that, constructive criticism is appreciated!

[jakubg1 440]

• The posing is hard to understand.
• There's no point to have one leg laying on another when the character doesn't sit.
• The cards doesn't look pixelated like Minecraft should be.
• Also, try to zoom out (either by increasing FOV or putting more space between the character and the camera).

 

Average render. 5/10

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

Hit me. 

27 minutes ago, jakubg1 said:

• The posing is hard to understand.
• There's no point to have one leg laying on another when the character doesn't sit.
• The cards doesn't look pixelated like Minecraft should be.
• Also, try to zoom out (either by increasing FOV or putting more space between the character and the camera).

 

Average render. 5/10

• The posing is fairly easy to understand. 
• That was the point.
• It looks fine. 
• If there isnt any other scenery why would you need zoom out.

Okay so here's what I have to say about it.

The posing is nice but I feel more relaxed posing would feel much more natural for the theme of the render. It's a bit boring with just the character and some scenery would pull it together a nicely.  I dont really have anything other things to say other than not to use the term constructive criticism. 

 

[IraelianEnergy 80]

13 hours ago, Ethanial said:

Hit me. 

• The posing is fairly easy to understand. 
• That was the point.
• It looks fine. 
• If there isnt any other scenery why would you need zoom out.

Okay so here's what I have to say about it.

The posing is nice but I feel more relaxed posing would feel much more natural for the theme of the render. It's a bit boring with just the character and some scenery would pull it together a nicely.  I dont really have anything other things to say other than not to use the term constructive criticism. 

 

I purposely use that term on forums for a reason. I understand if you have another point of view on that, but from my experience, I would much prefer saying 'constructive criticism' over something else.

13 hours ago, jakubg1 said:

• The posing is hard to understand.
• There's no point to have one leg laying on another when the character doesn't sit.
• The cards doesn't look pixelated like Minecraft should be.
• Also, try to zoom out (either by increasing FOV or putting more space between the character and the camera).

 

Average render. 5/10

In reply to your opinion on the cards, I have them for something else, but decided I wanted to do a render with them. They are supposed to look like that. Thank you for your input though.

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

3 hours ago, IraelianEnergy said:

I purposely use that term on forums for a reason. I understand if you have another point of view on that, but from my experience, I would much prefer saying 'constructive criticism' over something else.

In reply to your opinion on the cards, I have them for something else, but decided I wanted to do a render with them. They are supposed to look like that. Thank you for your input though.

My point is just to say criticism, you don’t need to say constructive.