Everyone in the next animation

[Thatguygamer134 20]

i know the red name was cut of its supposed to sat gamingwith lulu

[TheJeweledWolf 595]

Lighting is pretty bad, flatlands, posing is also rather bad, camera angle could be better, facial expressions need work, and the textures of weapons to skins clash.

 

Not a very good wallpaper, in my opinion.

[Thatguygamer134 20]

God im trying okay i know its not good 

 

[9redwoods 3.8k]

47 minutes ago, Thatguygamer134 said:

God im trying okay i know its not good 

 

quote people when you're talking to them

49 minutes ago, TheJeweledWolf said:

Lighting is pretty bad, flatlands, posing is also rather bad, camera angle could be better, facial expressions need work, and the textures of weapons to skins clash.

 

Not a very good wallpaper, in my opinion.

Explain how to do do that stuff. Don't just tell them what's wrong, especially if they're a newbie.

[TheJeweledWolf 595]

1 hour ago, Thatguygamer134 said:

God im trying okay i know its not good 

11 minutes ago, 9redwoods said:

quote people when you're talking to them

Explain how to do do that stuff. Don't just tell them what's wrong, especially if they're a newbie.

Whoops, I forgot.

To get rid of the flatlands, add scenery schematics. You should probably take a turtorial for lighting and posing. The camera angle was bad for me only because the characters don't seem centered, and that bugs me a bit. The textures of one of the weapons is HD (I think) while the characters are 8-bit (right?). For the facial expressions, they don't seem to have a reason for any of it.

[Thatguygamer134 20]

10 minutes ago, TheFastFilms said:

Learn from your mistakes. Don't deny help.

im not denying help im trying to learn from my mistakes

[Cryptic Runner 2.3k]

What is happening to your people lighting?

[Thatguygamer134 20]

4 hours ago, Cubic Ralsei said:

What is happening to your people lighting?

i honestly have no clue i think it bugged in the rendering process