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I know,i posted this a bit late.i had a little break from this series after i posted the first episode and i didn't have time to post it here
but better late then never amirite??

Anyway,2 months of works and it is done

i had nothing to say ?

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Ok so a lot of things bother me here.

1. Lack of sfx for most of the stuff like the pickaxe being thrown, rabbit coming after other rabbit, etc etc.

2. Creeper blows up and kills player but not the rabbit even though they were right next to it.

3. Player has the power to kill a rabbit from a long shot but doesn’t have the power to kill a creeper right next to him.

4. This is basically “Rabbit life”

5. This is also basically a remake of “All dogs go to heaven”

6. Some things don’t make sense such as the beginning. We meet a rabbit, we see 2 things, then we see a carrot, then we see a player who now wants to kill the rabbit.

7. The rabbit survives getting hit by the pickaxe even though it could’ve easily killed him at that speed.

8. This took 2 months

9. Some parts remind me of anime betrayals.

10. “Take my hand” - Rabbit angel who has a paw

now here is what I liked:

The death scene that should’ve been a death scene

Some of the lighting

annd... the movements I guess

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16 minutes ago, Mineshaft Animation said:

Ok so a lot of things bother me here.

1. Lack of sfx for most of the stuff like the pickaxe being thrown, rabbit coming after other rabbit, etc etc.

2. Creeper blows up and kills player but not the rabbit even though they were right next to it.

3. Player has the power to kill a rabbit from a long shot but doesn’t have the power to kill a creeper right next to him.

4. This is basically “Rabbit life”

5. This is also basically a remake of “All dogs go to heaven”

6. Some things don’t make sense such as the beginning. We meet a rabbit, we see 2 things, then we see a carrot, then we see a player who now wants to kill the rabbit.

7. The rabbit survives getting hit by the pickaxe even though it could’ve easily killed him at that speed.

8. This took 2 months

9. Some parts remind me of anime betrayals.

10. “Take my hand” - Rabbit angel who has a paw

now here is what I liked:

The death scene that should’ve been a death scene

Some of the lighting

annd... the movements I guess

1.im not a sfx expert,i really hate sfx sometime
2.yeah i guess
3.he doesn't have any reaction time (i guess that's what you call it)
4.no it isn't
5.what's “All dogs go to heaven”?
6.yeah,some of the plot had to be cut due to "deadline" issue,that why the plot is a bit weird and disconnected
7.he only got his skin,im just too lazy to make another skin with a bit of blood on the side of the body
8.xD
9.which one?
10.i didn't understand it but okay

Either way,thanks for your criticism
 

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4 hours ago, Mineshaft Animation said:

Ok so a lot of things bother me here.

1. Lack of sfx for most of the stuff like the pickaxe being thrown, rabbit coming after other rabbit, etc etc.

2. Creeper blows up and kills player but not the rabbit even though they were right next to it.

3. Player has the power to kill a rabbit from a long shot but doesn’t have the power to kill a creeper right next to him.

4. This is basically “Rabbit life”

5. This is also basically a remake of “All dogs go to heaven”

6. Some things don’t make sense such as the beginning. We meet a rabbit, we see 2 things, then we see a carrot, then we see a player who now wants to kill the rabbit.

7. The rabbit survives getting hit by the pickaxe even though it could’ve easily killed him at that speed.

8. This took 2 months

9. Some parts remind me of anime betrayals.

10. “Take my hand” - Rabbit angel who has a paw

now here is what I liked:

The death scene that should’ve been a death scene

Some of the lighting

annd... the movements I guess

Man, you should go work for Animation Sins or Cinema Sins.

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1 hour ago, Hagus said:

Man, you should go work for Animation Sins or Cinema Sins.

1. Animation sins doesn't accept Mine-imator creators
2. That would be great but then I would explain my problems towards the guy who is always speaking 

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The wind sure is loud

 

 

 

But the leaves are barely moving

anyways lemme criticize this thing

1. Too many sudden movements, I see no build up on a few of them which makes it seem pretty indecent

2. Camera movements give me nausea (Too much jesus)

3. SFX 

4. Always SFX

5. Too much fog

6. I dont get why the player would go for all this trouble just to kill a ******* bunny

7. Concept looks interesting but the overall result was a meh

 

good try.

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3 hours ago, HeYoNia said:

The wind sure is loud

 

 

 

But the leaves are barely moving

anyways lemme criticize this thing

1. Too many sudden movements, I see no build up on a few of them which makes it seem pretty indecent

2. Camera movements give me nausea (Too much jesus)

3. SFX 

4. Always SFX

5. Too much fog

6. I dont get why the player would go for all this trouble just to kill a ******* bunny

7. Concept looks interesting but the overall result was a meh

 

good try.

thanks,i will put it in my note.

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