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The camera is tilted a bit to much, like Hagus said, the pick-axe looks like its in his wrist. Did you remove the ground? Because in the background, there doesn't seem to be any grass... Its just blue.. Try moving the torso more, and not to lift his leg to much. If you are having trouble making it look like he is going up a block without moving his leg up to high, extrude the floor below him, and then move him up.

Other than those things, its good enough for an upvote

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49 minutes ago, EmberWing said:

Did you remove the ground? Because in the background, there doesn't seem to be any grass... Its just blue.

Looks like a Skywars map. Also, you should never have flatlands anyways, so he did the right thing if he doesn't have MC.

On topic:

  • The camera angle is a bit claustrophobic, maybe back up the camera more. If you back it up enough, you could lower the FOV, which would also improve this wallpaper.
  • A slight DOF would be nice. You can probably look up a tutorial on how to do DOF. 
  • If you can't get the light to work with you, maybe just use the normal MI sun, and turn the rotation around until you can see visible shadows.
  • Also, maybe try to position his pickaxe in his hand a little more. That's all I have for you. Just a bit more practice and some more criticism, and you'll for sure get better in no time. Good luck!
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