First Wallpaper

[Chrispy 8]

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First attempt at making a wallpaper.  Any tips and constructive criticism would be much appreciated as I would believe there is much I need to work on. Thanks!

(I do still have to upgrade Mine-Imator soon too to get rid of the watermark but I wanted to test the waters first)

 

Oh and I took this schematic out of my own survival world so I hope to make some kind of story based round my play through

 

Edited February 1, 2019 by Chrispy
Adding Text

[Mineshaft Animation 1.1k]

Not bad for a first wallpaper.

[IronDefender25 51]

COOL !

But you needed to remove the watermark.

[Rawami 319]

It's good for a beginner, you don't forgot the lighting, you used camera effects...

But :

1- Upgrade Mine-imator for disappear the water mark

2- The legs of the steve is a bit like a robot try to make a more realistic position

3- It's again really good for a beginner

Continue like this!

 

Edited February 1, 2019 by Rawami

[TheJeweledWolf 595]

It looks good for your first wallpaper, though I did notice some things.

• The fire glows, but doesn't seem to give off light.
• There are particles on the torch, but not the fire.
• Posing could be a touch better, but I'm not very good at it either so who am I to judge?
• Of course, the watermark. You already said you know, so whatever.

Altogether, I love the wallpaper +1

Edited February 1, 2019 by TheJeweledWolf

[TwoToRule 506]

dang