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[EmberWing 656]

So, I won't be posting for a while after this. I got my brother ( @Fray ) to help me by giving me some tips and making sure it looked nice before I posted it.

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Okay, the first thing you might think might be "Where is she? Why is there only that small 'island' of grass there?"

Well, pretty much, I had an idea, like space? Its really hard to explain, and no, they aren't aliens.

I spent a lot of time on this (About 3-4 hours cause I was also doing school at the time. I am virtual schooled)

So, why bats you may ask?

I don't know, they just looked nice...

I decided to add dogs instead of cats because I love cats and use them way to much.

Also, this isn't a specific person, just a random skin I found on skindex that I wanted to use for this. If you go on skindex its hard to find nice-looking-simple-skins, but I finally gave up on looking for a specific skin and just used the closest I could find.

In my opinion this looks really nice, but today, since I am feeling good, I welcome CC. (Not that I don't ever welcome CC, I am just sensitive about it.)

Sorry for making you read this much text .-. please (nicely) give me your opinion on this Wallpaper.

I forgot to add that I used Ken Model Template and Kens Facial Rig. Not like you can see the face lol

I also forgot to credit to these people/person: https://minecraft.curseforge.com/projects/wearable-backpacks

Edited January 23, 2019 by EmberWing

[Fray 711]

I already gave you my advice XD

+1

[EmberWing 656]

Just now, Fray said:

I already gave you my advice XD

+1

Well, step by step AS IM DOING IT advice

[ThatGuyBrian 1.1k]

neat concept, though the background, lighting, and framing could all use a bit of work.
protip: reduce the radius of point lights if two light sources are close to eachother, either that or just use one larger point light to compensate

[Rawami 319]

- You didn't forget the torch light

- Nice positionning

- Extrude floor

- Good  scenery

That's pretty nice ! +1

[EmberWing 656]

14 minutes ago, Rawami said:

- You didn't forget the torch light

- Nice positionning

- Extrude floor

- Good  scenery

That's pretty nice ! +1

Thanks!

29 minutes ago, ThatGuyBrian said:

neat concept, though the background, lighting, and framing could all use a bit of work.
protip: reduce the radius of point lights if two light sources are close to eachother, either that or just use one larger point light to compensate

Thanks, I have to remember that for next time

[Jake_28 1.2k]

52 minutes ago, EmberWing said:

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I also forgot to credit @Jake_28 for the backpack rig, I don't know if he even made it, but Fray showed me The Backpack Collab area and the backpack rig was there

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(I actually got the texture from this mod: https://minecraft.curseforge.com/projects/wearable-backpacks so you might wanna credit them instead..

Noice!

[EmberWing 656]

4 minutes ago, Jake_28 said:

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(I actually got the texture from this mod: https://minecraft.curseforge.com/projects/wearable-backpacks so you might wanna credit them instead..

Noice!

Thanks, I credited them.

[Extro 762]

It’s a little bland for my liking but not bad overall

[EmberWing 656]

8 minutes ago, DuallyElemental said:

It’s a little bland for my liking but not bad overall

I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU LIKE XD

But thanks

[Ghatos 1.8k]

Nice wallpaper, maybe you should add grass and put a custom sky texture (like this one for example)

 

[EmberWing 656]

5 minutes ago, Ghatos said:

Nice wallpaper, maybe you should add grass and put a custom sky texture (like this one for example)

 

Oh, yeah, I forgot the grass XD

Also, Fray was telling me to do that, but I refused because I liked the way it looked

But, I can probably do that next time, thanks!

Edited January 23, 2019 by EmberWing

[TheJeweledWolf 595]

2 hours ago, EmberWing said:

So, I won't be posting for a while after this. I got my brother ( @Fray ) to help me by giving me some tips and making sure it looked nice before I posted it.

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You're already doing a lot better. I do recommend adding a small particle effect to the torches. Other then that +1

I'm out of reactions though.

[EmberWing 656]

7 minutes ago, TheJeweledWolf said:

You're already doing a lot better. I do recommend adding a small particle effect to the torches. Other then that +1

I'm out of reactions though.

Its fine, I am too. ( I USED ONE REACTION TODAY, JUST ONE)

And, thanks for the tip, I will try to remember for next time

[Rollo 3.2k]

I don't know why Fray thinks more animals = better wallpaper but I think the bats are really out of place. That's just me. Also what ThatGuyBrian said.

[9redwoods 3.8k]

 

Pretty good lighting. The issues I have lie in the cinematography. The camera angle is kinda bland, and the FOV doesn’t look changed. This image would be more pleasing with a different camera angle, or at least a lower FOV.

Like what Rollo said, the bats seem out of place, and like what Ghatos said, a custom background would really improve it. Some bloom would be nice, or making the torches glow.

(also, don’t be offended that I downvoted your comment, I just didn’t like what you said.)

Edited January 23, 2019 by 9redwoods

[Fray 711]

23 minutes ago, Rollo said:

I don't know why Fray thinks more animals = better wallpaper 

Idk 

i just told her to add the dogs lol

[EmberWing 656]

54 minutes ago, 9redwoods said:

 

Pretty good lighting. The issues I have lie in the cinematography. The camera angle is kinda bland, and the FOV doesn’t look changed. This image would be more pleasing with a different camera angle, or at least a lower FOV.

Like what Rollo said, the bats seem out of place, and like what Ghatos said, a custom background would really improve it. Some bloom would be nice, or making the torches glow.

(also, don’t be offended that I downvoted your comment, I just didn’t like what you said.)

Oh fuuuuu.. I forgot to change the camera settings

[WAZZL3 369]

Nice lighting

[EmberWing 656]

5 hours ago, WAZZL3 said:

Nice lighting

Thanks