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Anyways, I have some criticism.

  • flatlands
  • this photo has too much scene-convenience. Maybe take something out like the chicken that serves no purpose of being there.
  • Why is the girl pointing at the camera? It's not supposed to actually be in the scene, right?
  • The boy's left arm isn't raised or anything, but just bent. No one would do this in real life, and it makes the posing look unrealistic.
  • The boy's right arm is raised for no reason, unless he's trying to put his arm around the girl, but that's not made clear, and he's too far away.
  • The girl's hair has visible cracks in it. Try bending it less.
  • Your watermark is messy and has no anti-aliasing, making it distracting and not pleasing to the eye.
  • The way the girl's legs are bent, she'd be tripping. Try to use less bend for the legs in the future, or sometimes no bend at all.
  • Those birds are as big as pterodactyls. 

That's all I have for criticism. I hope this helps you in the future. Have a great day!

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