Moving on (Non-Minecraft wallpaper)

[Cryptic Runner 2.3k]

A moving day in MetroCity.

[PigmanMovie 1.8k]

-the lighting and the compositition make the scene a bit confusing and hard to see/read

-seriously,i can't even see the character

-that glow blur on the side is...a bit too much for my taste

-the atmosphere doesn't really tell the theme perfectly,is it a sad theme or a murder just happen or he can't move on because of his ex idk

-is he holding a knife or a box,because i swear i seen him holding a knife but then it changes to a box,make the scene a bit brighter and maybe have somekind of light/lightrays reflecting onto the figure so that the viewer can see what he is doing and what's he look like

-(my prefences) i feel like the scenery is a bit empty a flat

That's all,i would say this an ehhh...idk There's just nothing special to look at

Edited November 10, 2018 by PigmanMovie

[Cryptic Runner 2.3k]

10 hours ago, PigmanMovie said:

-the lighting and the compositition make the scene a bit confusing and hard to see/read

-seriously,i can't even see the character

-that glow blur on the side is...a bit too much for my taste

-the atmosphere doesn't really tell the theme perfectly,is it a sad theme or a murder just happen or he can't move on because of his ex idk

-is he holding a knife or a box,because i swear i seen him holding a knife but then it changes to a box,make the scene a bit brighter and maybe have somekind of light/lightrays reflecting onto the figure so that the viewer can see what he is doing and what's he look like

-(my prefences) i feel like the scenery is a bit empty a flat

That's all,i would say this an ehhh...idk There's just nothing special to look at

He's holding a box. I tried making sort of 8-bit fingers or something like that.

The scenery is flat because i was going for the Indiegame style.

oh and whoops the fog i put it a bit too much

[PigmanMovie 1.8k]

10 hours ago, Jadturentale said:

He's holding a box. I tried making sort of 8-bit fingers or something like that.

The scenery is flat because i was going for the Indiegame style.

oh and whoops the fog i put it a bit too much

What are you suppose to tell through that render?

What story are you trying to tell through that render?

Is it just a test render or a render that has a story behind it?

Cuz im curious

[Cryptic Runner 2.3k]

On 11/10/2018 at 8:59 PM, PigmanMovie said:

What are you suppose to tell through that render?

What story are you trying to tell through that render?

Is it just a test render or a render that has a story behind it?

Cuz im curious

it's not really telling a story, it's just a guy moving houses.

[PigmanMovie 1.8k]

7 hours ago, Jadturentale said:

it's not really telling a story, it's just a guy moving houses.

Oh,doesn't look like a guy moving into a new houses

Probably make the render a bit less confusingly (is that a word?)

That's just my advice