Another Star Wars wallpaper [Wallpaper - 4K]

[Adri526 171]

Here is another Star Wars wallpaper with lightsabers 

No external softwares were used, only Mine-Imator. Enjoy !

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[WAZZL3 369]

Nice lightsaber effects

[9redwoods 3.8k]

I think the camera angle and posing could be increased greatly. Try getting the camera further away from the characters and lower the FOV a bit; maybe add a slight dutch angle.

The right arm of the sith and the left arm of the Jedi are just there. They seem out of place and awkward, and they're not helping in the fight. Maybe try to make them useful by making them help with balance or extend them out to the other character.

Nice lightsabers, I couldn't do that effect to save my life.

[ThiefPlayz735 10]

This goes to show (in MY OPINION) a little bit of potential with rigs/mineimator itself

 

[PigmanMovie 1.8k]

Pros:

+those lightsaber effect look really damn great,the glow blur and everything about the glow is perfect

Criticism:

-i feel like the angle and the pose could be a bit better 

Option 1:

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Try to make the camera a bit far away and decrease the FOV a bit to increase the scale of the battle

Option 2:

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Maybe try to make thr angle coming from below the figure and have a giant moon in the background,but that's just my prefences

Option 3:

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Try to put a rock or a grass in the side of the camera and the rest of the camera is showing the battle making it feel like we are in the world (i guess)

-lighting could be a bit better

-the pose look very stiff,i would suggest looking at refences online or even use some star wars pose for refences

-i feel like the color doesn't really match,try to remove 2 lightsaber and then choose a combination of:blue and red,red and green and blue and yellow (just my prefences)

Not bad,could be better,but i really like that glow,it really match my prefences of MI glow

[Adri526 171]

Ok, thanks for feedback !