Cookie || Minecraft Animation

[Shadow 982 16]

https://youtu.be/h2FELoIxfvg

 I make a animation about a boy share his cookie to a girl.

I still use mine imator community build because my laptop got a lag when use new mine imator ;-;

Please give me a suggestion to make a a better animation

 

 

Edited October 28, 2018 by Shadow 982

[jakubg1 440]

That's a great animation! Only two things:

1. The movements are good, but for example in 0:21 you could add some idle movements.

2. The title of the animation should appear on the beginning, not on the end. You could also mention who made the rigs, I don't see credits anywhere.

8/10, because I don't like love-based stories, but it's only my opinion.

[Shadow 982 16]

7 hours ago, jakubg1 said:

That's a great animation! Only two things:

1. The movements are good, but for example in 0:21 you could add some idle movements.

2. The title of the animation should appear on the beginning, not on the end. You could also mention who made the rigs, I don't see credits anywhere.

8/10, because I don't like love-based stories, but it's only my opinion.

Well thank you for suggest :3

 

1. I am not good at animating

2. I've ever seen a animation that the title is on the end of animation. So i try it

[Jake_28 1.2k]

Good animation, but don’t accept cookies from strangers. They could be poisonous!

[Shadow 982 16]

10 hours ago, Jake_28 said:

Good animation, but don’t accept cookies from strangers. They could be poisonous!