mornin

[AKMRP 120]

testing out the lighting

yay

my edited version

 

my friend edit version: fqeiz_

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[StarFX 261]

for your friend

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the edited version of your friend looks so bad i can't even stand looking at it

here's how your friend can improve

Use high quality textures. 

don't make something "on screen" too much

basicly don't let an effect take out the whole screen 

*i'm talking about the left one

Low quality.

5.0/10

for you

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pretty good at least i can look at something 

The sword's Brightness? 

Other then that not bad

7.5/10

 

[9redwoods 3.8k]

The lighting looks kinda off. I can’t tell what though.