I love my life [Minecraft Animation]

[Douya233 181]

It's my first animation here. Hope u can give me some advice XD.

 

[BaconSandwich 1.1k]

Pretty solid editing (I can't even edit period,)  and you managed to get pretty smooth animation for the most part, but  I think the intro is too long compared to the video itself and there were one or two parts that looked really linear (like Steve looking up after the lilypad flew up.) All in all, great first animation!

[9redwoods 3.8k]

Ok, here's some criticism...

It was kind of fast overall and it didn't give you enough time to fully understand what was going on in the scene.

The movement of the character was very unnatural. Make slower transitions and more exaggerated believable movements.

That's really all I have to say. Good job for a first animation, though!

[Douya233 181]

6 hours ago, BaconSandwich said:

Pretty solid editing (I can't even edit period,)  and you managed to get pretty smooth animation for the most part, but  I think the intro is too long compared to the video itself and there were one or two parts that looked really linear (like Steve looking up after the lilypad flew up.) All in all, great first animation!

Thanks, many people have told me about the allocation of time. And the part it's actually unnatural XD.

5 hours ago, 9redwoods said:

Ok, here's some criticism...

It was kind of fast overall and it didn't give you enough time to fully understand what was going on in the scene.

The movement of the character was very unnatural. Make slower transitions and more exaggerated believable movements.

That's really all I have to say. Good job for a first animation, though!

Thank u for the advice! Maybe it's because I pay too much attention to the combination of pictures and music, it moves very fast.

[Skjold 7.6k]