Indonesian Independence

[alzcreation 928]

So  At 17 Augst 2018 Indonesian Independence Day
So HERE my  Render !
HUT RI 73



^ Night Version
v Day Version   



Credit:

Butterfly: @Aizekkfox
Flag Model By: @Spontaneous Explosions
Flag Texture By: Me

Opinions?

[9redwoods 3.8k]

Amazing work!!! The only thing I have to say is that it's a bit hard to see what's happening in the night scene. I figured it out once I looked at the day scene, but maybe you could put the butterflies in less awkward spots so the viewer isn't confused for the first 5 seconds upon looking at it.

[KrisFirebolt 969]

1 hour ago, 9redwoods said:

Amazing work!!! The only thing I have to say is that it's a bit hard to see what's happening in the night scene. I figured it out once I looked at the day scene, but maybe you could put the butterflies in less awkward spots so the viewer isn't confused for the first 5 seconds upon looking at it.

its just fine for me, maybe your computer brightness is too low

[9redwoods 3.8k]

1 hour ago, KrisFirebolt said:

its just fine for me, maybe your computer brightness is too low

I didn't say I had trouble seeing it. I just didn't understand it because the butterflies' positions were awkward and it took a second to see what was actually going on.