Rinkaku Kakuja-V2

[Red-X 9]

Kakuja Mask by STEVE0402

Face rig by Skibbz

Edited August 19, 2018 by Red-X
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[NiSoSiam 495]

i can't see the detail. can you put on some point light on it?

[9redwoods 3.8k]

Don't think of this as hate, It's only criticism.

Here we go:

Edge of the map on the left is very distracting

It's very hard to see what's going on. Maybe add some night lighting.

There is no sort of editing. Always edit your pictures in some way.

The camera angle is very weak. I always put my cameras close to the ground looking up at the scene. I think you should, too.

Upon brightening the image...

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I still don't have a clue what the thing is doing. Practice with different poses and make it look right.

You can see blurry spots on the image. I don't know what that is, really. It can't be DOF because way in the back, the trees aren't affected. 

That's about it. Keep practicing and learn from criticism, and you'll get better, I promise!

[Red-X 9]

17 hours ago, 9redwoods said:

Don't think of this as hate, It's only criticism.

Here we go:

Edge of the map on the left is very distracting

It's very hard to see what's going on. Maybe add some night lighting.

There is no sort of editing. Always edit your pictures in some way.

The camera angle is very weak. I always put my cameras close to the ground looking up at the scene. I think you should, too.

Upon brightening the image...

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I still don't have a clue what the thing is doing. Practice with different poses and make it look right.

You can see blurry spots on the image. I don't know what that is, really. It can't be DOF because way in the back, the trees aren't affected. 

That's about it. Keep practicing and learn from criticism, and you'll get better, I promise!

I was trying to make it look like this and i will try to make it better,thanks.

Edited August 20, 2018 by Red-X