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Sorry to break it to you, but that's a boat.

Lol in all seriousness, you're getting better. Here's some criticism, though, as always.

Some of the glass is super lit up, while some of it isn't lit at all. Please give some consistency.

The eyes are glowing waaay too much. Might as well call her herobrine.

Again, I think the camera angle could be improved. If the camera was below the character looking up along with some change of FOV, it would look much better.

The lighting could be improved. Maybe add a slight light blue glow to the scene using a spotlight with a high range. 

The wallpaper is a bit boring overall. Maybe you could spice up the wallpaper to make it more pleasing and enjoying to look at.

Other than that, great job! You've made lots of improvement!

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10 minutes ago, 9redwoods said:

Sorry to break it to you, but that's a boat.

Lol in all seriousness, you're getting better. Here's some criticism, though, as always.

Some of the glass is super lit up, while some of it isn't lit at all. Please give some consistency.

The eyes are glowing waaay too much. Might as well call her herobrine.

Again, I think the camera angle could be improved. If the camera was below the character looking up along with some change of FOV, it would look much better.

The lighting could be improved. Maybe add a slight light blue glow to the scene using a spotlight with a high range. 

The wallpaper is a bit boring overall. Maybe you could spice up the wallpaper to make it more pleasing and enjoying to look at.

Other than that, great job! You've made lots of improvement!

Thanks

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