Fishing

[ObviHasNoFriends 23]

I just made a fishing render.. how does it look?

Spoiler

https://imgur.com/a/pTuKFyo

I think I need to work on my lighting, but this was a while back so I'm better at lighting

Edited July 27, 2018 by ObviHasNoFriends

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Alex's smile is scary

the fish looks tiny, make it bigger so it feels more like a sense of accomplishment

lighting (as stated)

Steve's boat looks bent

Water could be better, its super shallow. Was this built buy you in MC? If so, make it deeper so it looks like there are more fish.

Steve doesn't really look sad

Alex doesn't need eyelashes imo, but this one is optional

it gets too foggy too early, like all of a sudden

 

the posing does look pretty good

ALSO WHY DOES YOUR LOCATION SAY AT YOUR BED WAITING TO MINGLE? 

[Cryptic Runner 2.3k]

Alex looks too round compared to steve.  Steve's pupils have too much height.   And the paddles of steve's boat are too unrealisticly posed. But hey, keep up the good work!

[ObviHasNoFriends 23]

1 minute ago, DuallyElemental said:

Alex's smile is scary

the fish looks tiny, make it bigger so it feels more like a sense of accomplishment

lighting (as stated)

Steve's boat looks bent

Water could be better, its super shallow. Was this built buy you in MC? If so, make it deeper so it looks like there are more fish.

Steve doesn't really look sad

Alex doesn't need eyelashes imo, but this one is optional

it gets too foggy too early, like all of a sudden

 

the posing does look pretty good

ALSO WHY DOES YOUR LOCATION SAY AT YOUR BED WAITING TO MINGLE? 

Thank you for the criticism!

(Also just a side note I made this account a while back and when I came back and saw ready to mingle I was like wtf, I'm gonna change it as soon as possible)

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1 minute ago, ObviHasNoFriends said:

Thank you for the criticism!

(Also just a side note I made this account a while back and when I came back and saw ready to mingle I was like wtf, I'm gonna change it as soon as possible)

k good lol

[MasterArcher12 160]

Steve's luck is why he "obviously has no friends". Get it?