Time of Evil

[Dawid24M 219]

I'm starting to create the series "Time of Evil"

One of the characters Batman4014 "Blood Punk" will perform with him.

 

See for yourself.

I do not know what to write.

 

 

[9redwoods 3.8k]

Linear animation

Bad lighting

Stretched textures

Bad spelling

unexistent audio

boring schematics

Almost sounds like monster school

[Nerdinq 225]

This honestly wasn't as bad as @9redwoods claimed it to be. But he is right about a lot of what he said. The animation was really linear but possibly on of the better linear animations I've seen. Use transitions next time. They're in the Keyframe tab. Take some time to mess around with lighting a bit. It will help make your scene look a tad more realistic. Spelling is okay, not everyone is as literate as redwoods. Keep away from stretched textures. They take away from the quality of your animation. Audio could use a bit of work. Maybe make the music a bit quieter and the sound effects louder. I think the music choice could be improved as well. Hopefully I've helped in some way. Can't wait to see what you make next!

[9redwoods 3.8k]

4 minutes ago, Nerdinq said:

not everyone is as literate as redwoods.

 

[Dawid24M 219]

55 minutes ago, 9redwoods said:

Linear animation - story of movie is.

Bad lighting - ault in mine-imitator

Stretched textures - I had to get to the door

Bad spelling - You'll see so bad.

unexistent audio - It was difficult to find the right sound

boring schematics - I planned it

Almost sounds like monster school - It has more subscriptions than my channel.

 

[Craky 21]

Adding a point light on the dark scene won't hurt and also have fun experimenting with transition for the motion,Might be hard at first but it will improve the movement drastically